Students Answer the Question, "Who Is Your Hero?"Below is a collection of the StageofLife.com essays from high school and college students as they answered our monthly writing contest question...
"Who is your hero?"
From Lady Gaga to Oprah to Gandhi to their English teacher, over 2,650 students visited our writing contest and 190 high school and college students nominated a personal hero by submitting a 500 word essay. We've written a summary of our findings that share general observations and themes from the student hero submissions from the writing contest, which ran on PRNewswire immediately after the contest wrapped up; you'll find that summary further down this page.
However, immediately below, we've featured the winning essay, our finalists and some of the other hero nominations featuring personal, public and famous names. Read an essay or two, and if you have the time, make a comment on the essays you enjoyed the most. We know the student writers will love hearing your positive input (they'll get an email
notifying them of your comment on their essay.
While this writing contest is over, if you have a hero to nominate, you can do that now by sharing your hero essay too. Click the blue "Share Your Story" button here to upload your essay and then Contact Us so we can add it to the list below.

Winner: My Hero is Friedl Dicker-Brandeis
High School Finalists:
College Finalists:
Other Essays (in no particular order):
StageofLife.com could not list all of the essays submitted but we thank every student that participated in the conversation and the contest. If you're interested in reading and talking more about real-life heroes, we encourage you to visit MyHero.com
To enter the current Stage of Life monthly writing contest for high school students and college students:
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[YORK, PA – StageofLife.com] Move over Lady Gaga. Gandhi and Nick Jonas, please take a back seat. In fact, Oprah, Michael Jackson, and Coach Nick Saban can take the bench as well. In its national essay contest for high school students, StageofLife.com, a writing resource for teens, discovered that “My Mom” is the number one answer given when teens were asked the question, “Who is your Hero?”
2,500+ high school and college students visited the writing contest page, and hundreds of students submitted essays describing their hero. The essays nominated a wide variety of people ranging from Ellen DeGeneres to Todd Beamer (Flight 93 hero on 9/11) to Maurice Jones-Drew to Delta Force Snipers to...Dobby, the House Elf from the Harry Potter Series.
As judges poured over 100,000+ words written about heroes, several insights emerged about today's teens:
1) Teens are inspired by family: Whether it was Mom (#1 most named “hero” in the contest), Dad, Grandparents or a variety of other blood relations, nearly half of the teen essays named a family member as their personal hero, indicating that those closest to the daily routines and life of a teenager often have the best chance to make a positive impact.
As one of the essay finalists wrote her about mother, “Some people may look at a famous cartoon character as their hero, but my mother is my own superwoman.”
Another finalist had this to say about her father in her essay entitled, My Hero is My Knight in Shining Armour, “Of all the superheroes, mythical monsters, and epic warriors of time long past my hero was always right at my side.”
2) Teens find inspiration from celebrities and athletes: The second largest group of nominated heroes fell into the “famous person” category. Essays about Britney Spears, Walt Disney, Bruce Lee, Tyra Banks, Tupac Shakur and dozens of others poured in as many students looked to public figures as their role models.
One student said of rapper, Eminem , “One of [his] most famous quotes is 'Success is my only option, failure's not'. I live my everyday life from this quote. I will never let anyone bring me down, or say I am not good enough.”
3) Teens rely on those around them: While celebrities drew scores of nominations, there was another group nearly just as large – everyday people. These were non-family individuals who come in contact with the student on a regular basis. Teens found heroes in their friends, significant others, coaches, and teachers.
One essay finalists had a creative introduction about a favorite teacher, “An army of rabid school children stand before him. Fueled by teenage angst and enraged by having last lunch, these monsters are ready to devour all who dare to educate them. But one man, armed only with a tome of infinite knowledge, and the legendary sword of 'Expo', awaits these savages with a wink and a smile. That man is (my) World History teacher and my hero”
4) Teens want to change the world: Some of the essays did not name a specific person, but rather a concept or a larger group of people as their hero. From lifeguards to men and women of the armed forces to anyone with a disability, students expressed a need to make a difference in the world, and their heroes reflected that desire. For instance, one student named “Cancer Fighters” as her hero – defined as anyone fighting the battle of cancer.
A blog comment left on the Cancer Fighter essay read, “I wanted to say thanks...because it is like you are saying my mom is a hero to you even though you have never meet her...she is a cancer survivor.”
The winning essay, written by homeschool student, Taylor of Putnam, CT, honored Friedl Dicker-Brandeis, a woman who died in a Nazi gas chamber in 1944, but who was better known for spending her time selflessly teaching children art and other forbidden subjects in the Terezin Concentration Camp.
Taylor's essay shared, “Her story shows that hope can bloom even in the coldest of environments; that creativity can change the world, even if that world is the dream world of a child; and above all that even in the darkest of situations, the kindness and goodness inside of us can find a way to shine.”
In partnership with StageofLife.com, the MY HERO project will also featured Taylor's about Friedl Dicker-Brandeis on MyHero.com.
Margaret Dean, Communications Director for the My HERO Project comments, “Her thoughtful reflection on the character qualities that prompted Friedl Dicker-Brandeis to teach art and bring hope to children during the darkest of times, at great risk to her own life, paints a stirring portrait of the best of humanity.”
As an extension of the hero essay contest, StageofLife.com released its monthly free lesson plan for history and language arts teachers on its education resources section of the website. The lesson plan asks students to define “hero” and leads the class through a series of activities, including a “Hero Walk,” that challenges, refines and/or supports their original hero definition.
Rebecca Thiegs, M. Ed., Education Consultant for StageofLife.com and current high school Language Arts teacher at Red Lion Area Senior High School in Red Lion, PA, stated,
“Archetypal theory applies to so much of history and literature. Teachers will find the application of the hero lesson plan flexible for a variety of texts, and the closure/homework section of the lesson supports our core mission of getting students to write and blog more outside of the classroom.”
StageofLife.com has consolidated many of the “Who Is Your Hero” essays on a summary page for review at http://www.stageoflife.com/Who_Is_Your_Hero.aspx . When asked why she participated in the writing contest by naming Ash Ketchum, college student and essay finalist, Allison, answered,
“I like Stage of Life because it's a convenient forum to share life experiences with others in similar situations, and give/receive advice from people in all stages of life.”
The current writing contest for high school students asks the question, “What stresses you out?” A resource video about understanding stress from LearntobeHealthy.org is available for teens to view, and national sponsor, Shutterfly.com, is again providing the monthly prize. StageofLife.com is offering up SWAG and Featured Blogger status on the site to the next student essay winner.
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January 2013 National Writing Contest: Where do we go after Newtown?Writing Contest Details: What solutions, if any, would you propose to Congress, parents, school officials, gun advocacy groups, or the NRA after the tragic event in Newtown this last December?Or, on a more emotional level, how do you simply feel about this event and what changes, if any, did it make in you? And for everyone...where do we go from here?? View our Writing Contest Summary on Teens and Guns. |
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December 2012 Writing Contest: How will you be the change in 2013?
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November 2012 Writing Contest: What was the most inspirational or important book you've ever read?
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October 2012: SPORTS & FAMILY - How have sports positively (or negatively) shaped traditions in your family?
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September 2012: POLITICS & PASSION - Share a story about what one political issue is most important to you in the upcoming U.S. Presidential election.
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July & August 2012: MUSIC - Share a story of a song that played an important role during a unique time in your life.
Writing Contest Details: Music plays an integral role in our lives. There was the song that was playing in the background during that last slow dance on your first prom. The song you listened to over and over after your first break-up. Or the song you and your friends belted out at the top of your lungs one summer night around a campfire. |
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June 2012: NATURE - How has nature inspired you?Writing Contest Details: With summer upon us, students will find themselves out of school...and outside! Or...will they?According to Richard Louv, author of Last Child in the Woods, today's children (and adults) are deprived of a basic necessity we have as humans...to connect with the outdoors. Louv labels this phenomenon (that many saw happening but couldn't quite articulate): "nature-deficit disorder." Between jobs, Facebook, online gaming, or bad weather, many teens will forgo opportunities to feel the grass beneath their toes, to breath in a summer breeze, to let sun touch their skin, and to otherwise connect with the planet around them. But we know that can't be the case for everyone...can it? Are we all experiencing nature-deficit? How has nature inspired you? View Summary Report: Teens and Nature |
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May 2012: TEEN PREGNANCY - What do you attribute to the decline of teen pregnancies? Writing Contest Details: According to the latest teen pregnancy statistics from the CDC, U.S. teen birth rates are at an all time low. But the last report still showed a total of 367,752 babies were born to teen girls aged 15–19. In honor of May being National Teen Pregnancy Prevention Month, we want to hear from teens and college students about why they think teen pregnancies are dropping. What's the reason? What's happening at your school or with your friends or in your community VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: Teen Pregnancy Prevention
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Writing Contest Details: In honor of the hottest student movie ticket in town right now, "The Hunger Games" (based off the YA fiction novel of the same title by Suzanne Collins), we wanted to find out what films speak to teens and college students. |
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March 2012: POETRY - Dedicate a Poem to Someone Who MattersWriting Contest Details: In preparation for April’s National Poetry Writing Month, we are asking teens and college students to write a poem in dedication to someone who matters in their life. Whether it is a family member, friend, teacher, celebrity or kind stranger, write an original poem about what that person means to you.VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: Teen Poems
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February 2012: LOVE - What's Your Definition of Love?
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January 2012: Person to Watch in 2012?Writing Contest Details: Last month, TIME magazine named "The Protestor" their Person of the Year for 2011. That got us thinking...okay, but who is the person to watch in 2012? So, in looking back at the last 12 months and considering the future, who would you nominate as the Person to Watch for 2012, and why? Whether it's a celebrity, an innovator, a politician, a cultural icon, an up-and-coming artist, a rising star or someone more personal in your life, we want to hear, in 500 words or less, who your Person to Watch for 2012 would be. VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See who teens chose as the Person to Watch in 2012
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November & December 2011: AWARENESS - What issue or cause should receive its own "awareness" month?
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October 2011: TRUST & SAFETY - Do you trust our institutions to keep us safe?Details: As we look ahead to Halloween, there are scarier things than ghosts and goblins in the lives of today's teenagers and college students.
For instance, from a historical perspective, Baby Boomers grew up living under the threat of nuclear Armageddon, complete with classroom drills to hide under their desks in the case of nuclear attack. However, today's teenagers and college students have been growing up in their own unique time:
How do you, as a student, feel about these threats, and do you have trust in your parents, school or government (the major institutions around you) to keep you safe? VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See what teens wrote about trust and safety
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September 2011: EDUCATION - Teacher Appreciation essaysDetails: It's the big back in school month. You're either loving it, hating it, or experiencing a mixture of both. In fact, some of you may already be waiting for final bell to ring (even if it's only 9:45am). However, no matter how this year is starting out (good or bad), we know that there have been certain teachers and classes in the past that stand out in your mind... This month, think back to a favorite class or educator (teacher/coach/director/principal). Whether it was their attitude, the way they taught, or a life lesson you learned from their class/sport/activity, how did this person make a positive impact in your life?
VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See what teens wrote about their teachers.
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August 2011: SELF-REFLECTION - Letter to MeDetails: We want you to write a letter to yourself. Yes, you heard us...a letter to yourself. Take 15 minutes, alone, and spend some time thinking about the upcoming school year. Think about the things you want to accomplish. The things you fear. Think about where you've been and where you're going. Think about how your summer has been going. What are you looking forward to? What are you dreading about the return to school? Think about your goals. Think about if you're looking to make a big change this year...or simply survive? After all of that thinking, now write a "Letter to Me." This is a letter addressed to yourself. Tackle some of the topics we've outlined above...or get creative and come up with your own original angle for the letter. VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See what teens had to write to themselves in our "Letter Me" writing prompt
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July 2011: BULLYING - Have you ever been bullied, teased, or picked on? If so, about what?
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June 2011: PARENTS - What is one thing you don't know about your Mother or Father?
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May 2011: OBSTACLES - What was the most difficult thing you overcame this school year?
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April 2011: PROM - Is prom a positive or negative teen tradition?
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March 2011: MEDIA - What form of media impacts your life the most, and why?Teen Trends: How do teens feel about the media? The "media" is an undeniably powerful entity in our daily lives, and even more invasive for teens and college students, a generation growing up with more forms of media choices than any other generation before them. |
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February 2011: MARRIAGE - What is the value of marriage?Teen Trends: How do teens feel about marriage? This contest came out in February 2011. The month of love. Valentine's Day sits right in the middle of this month and helps (or in some cases forces) all of us to pay homage to the idea of romance...love. We got little controversial this month and asked teens to share their point of view on marriage. VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See how teens feel about marriage...
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January 2011: MAKE A DIFFERENCE - What organization, company, non-profit or 'cause' will help make the world a better place?Teen Trends: How do teens want to better the world? Our mission on StageofLife.com is to help change the world, one story at a time. What a better way to do that than to ask teens and college students about worthwhile causes we should all know about. This was an opportunity for teens to shed light and share with us their favorite non-profit, company, organization or 'cause' that could help make the world a better place. VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See how teens feel about making the world a better place...
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December 2010: MONEY - What is your relationship with money? How do you spend (or save)...and why?Teen Trends: How do teens feel about money? Money....Cash. Coin. Greenbacks. Pesos. Gravy. Deniro. KaChing. Moola. So we're curious...how do teens and college students feel about money? Whether the student knew a homeless teen or has a friend living in the penthouse, we wanted to know about their relationship with the almighty dollar. VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See how teens feel about money... |
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November 2010: GIVING THANKS - What are you most thankful for?Teen Trends: What are teens grateful for? This writing contest rolled out in November 2010. We all get busy during the day-to-day routine of our lives, but it's important to stop once in while and reflect on what matters most, and to give thanks for that. Keeping that in mind, we wanted to hear from teens about who or what, in their lives right now, should receive public acknowledgment of their thanks. VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See for who and what teens are thankful... |
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October 2010: TEEN STRESS - What stresses you out, and how do you cope with that stress?Teen Trends: How do students deal with stress? From classes to homework to jobs to extra curricular activities to social outings, teens and college students are maintaining hectic schedules. Add on top of that any current relationship hardships, social issues, e.g. bullying, illnesses or other personal problems and it's not surprising that many young people feel...stressed. . |
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September 2010: HEROES - Who is your hero?Teen Trends: Who would a teenager name as their hero? We wanted to talk about heroes, both big and small, with high school and college students. We asked teens to name their hero, it could be a family member, someone famous, or an everyday person in their lives who is quietly making a difference, and then write a 500 word essay about that hero. You'll love these responses. VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See who teens nominated as their heroes... |
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August 2010: EDUCATION - What suggestion(s) do you have to make a positive change at your school or with the educational system as a whole?Teen Trends: How would teens improve education? We wanted to know how students were perceiving their educations, educational environments at their high schools, colleges and universities and the overall trends in education. We asked the teens for ideas on how to improve the educational environment. VIEW SUMMARY REPORT: See how teens would improve the educational system... |
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July 2010: FOOD - Do we have an obligation to take better care of ourselves by making changes in the way we eat and/or buy and consume food?Teen Trends: How do teens feel about food, obesity and nutrition? TV shows like NBC's Biggest Loser are big hits and books like Michael Pollan's Food Rules are flying off the shelves. Even film documentaries like Food, Inc. and Super Size Me have pushed into the mainstream consciousness. It goes without saying a tipping point is occurring in our society's awareness in regards to people's relationship with food. Obesity in America is reaching an epidemic...but are people ready or really willing to change? Is our addiction to unhealthy food too hard to break? See how teens feel about food, obesity and nutrition...[this summary report is being pulled from the essay archive for posting here soon] |
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June 2010: COLLEGE - What is the most difficult thing (for you) about college?Teen Trends: How do teens feel about college? We want to know what's making the college process or college itself difficult and why. Financial aid? Application process? Juggling classes and work? What is making college difficult? This contest was held in partnership with "Take America to College" initiative. See how teens feel about college...[this summary report is being pulled from the essay archive for posting here soon] |
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May 2010: ENVIRONMENT - What is one behavior you can either change or incorporate into your daily life that will reduce our negative impact on the environment?Teen Trends: How do teens feel about the environment? The negative environmental impact and tragedy of lives lost from the BP off-shore oil rig disaster was obvious. What we wanted from our high school and college students entering this month's writing contest was not their outrage about how this could have happened, but rather, share one solution (big or small) that can help combat man's ever-reaching environmental impact. See how teens feel about helping the environment...[this summary report is being pulled from the essay archive for posting here soon] |